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Latest comment: 1 month ago by Pirateofthewest in topic Tone

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@Pirateofthewest: Thanks for the tag — it was fair. I've rewritten the article to address it: removed the founder's promotional quotes, the company's marketing language ("richly blended", "explosive international growth"), the packaging and pricing-plan detail, and a paragraph of regional market statistics that wasn't specific to the company. Remaining claims sourced to the company or to its founder are now explicitly attributed. Let me know if anything still reads as non-neutral. ~~~~

Reference names and formatting from The Squirrel Game's cleanup have been kept. ~~~~ Don’t Get Hope And Give Up 20:16, 26 September 2026 (UTC)Reply

Hi @Give Up, from my experience so far! a detailed encyclopaedic article (not too short and not too long) always has better chances than a short article having good amount of reliable coverage present. You may improve the article with more details in neutral point of view supported with reliable coverage to address article issues. Pirateofthewest (talk) 07:36, 27 September 2026 (UTC)Reply