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Latest comment: 4 months ago by Joko2468 in topic GA review

Potential sources

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-Indy beetle (talk) 01:56, 2 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

-Indy beetle (talk) 04:00, 2 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

-Indy beetle (talk) 05:01, 5 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:John R. Good/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Indy beetle (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Joko2468 (talk · contribs) 16:46, 18 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

General comments

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Taking this up, great work on the article. It is well written and comprehensive, and all illustrations have the appropriate copyright tags. Joko2468 (talk) 16:46, 18 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • I have some problems with the opening sentence, MOS:FIRST states: "For topics notable for only one reason, this reason should usually be given in the first sentence." He isn't notable as a barber, nor was he apparently notably successful. This is a very interesting article, but in my view the current first sentence doesn't do the best job of clearly representing this and hooking the reader in. A better one in my opinion would be something like: John R. Good (1815 – April 1878) was an American freedman and politician in North Carolina, who was emancipated by a special state legislative act in 1855 and subsequently became an advocate for the rights of African-Americans and freedmen.
    • I've rephrased along those lines. -IB
  • Craven County should be linked, as should antebellum period, AME Zion, reconstruction. fire companies might be an interesting link, as might black suffrage.
  • The Political career section could really do with being broken up with subsections but there doesn't seem to be a natural way of doing that. Later life is only one year later, so should probably be appended to the previous paragraph. How about White House delegation starting April 1864 and State-level organization and later career starting August 1865?
    • I've added three subsections, have a look. -IB

Joko2468 (talk) 16:46, 18 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

Randomised spot check of citations

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15, 4, 31, 29, 40

  • 15, 29: could you provide quotations for these?

Joko2468 (talk) 16:46, 18 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • Ref 15 (Cecelski 2012, pp. 121–122): "John Good spoke next. He was also intimidated to address a crowd that included so many distinguished ministers, physicians, and writers. He did not talk for very long, but his physical appearance and manner made a lasting impression [...] 'We were remarkably struck with this gentleman's manner,' Hamilton recalled. 'He had dwelt amid the horrors of slavery for so long, and had seen so much of it that he seemed too full for utterance. Tears and action would have suited him better than words.' [...] Unlike Good, Pierson came across as an articulate, sophisticated gentleman [...]" -IB
  • Ref 29 (Cecelski 2012, p. 186): "Oddly enough, they selected Galloway, along with James Harris and John Good, to inquire if Governor Holden might address the African American convention and to hand-deliver the open letter to the white convention's leaders [...] Governor Holden declined the invitation." -IB
    Great thank you, I assume Hamilton being with the Anglo-African is supported there as well. Joko2468 (talk) 09:59, 19 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

Checklist

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail: