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Latest comment: 2 months ago by Parsecboy in topic GA review

B class review

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B class. But please note the slight variations in the measurements between the text and the infobox. Djmaschek (talk) 03:05, 12 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • Tons burthen: text = 308289⁄94, infobox = 308279⁄94.
  • Horsepower: text = 1543, infobox = 1548.
  • Armament - lower deck: text = 34 8-inch, infobox = 36 8-inch. (I think 36 is wrong because it adds up to 93 guns.)

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS James Watt/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:46, 12 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 03:48, 21 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this one. Parsecboy (talk) 03:48, 21 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • Images: only deficiency is the UK tag missing for File:'The Snap' Gun-Boat of H.M.S. 'James Watt,' sent to intercept along-shore traffic ILN-1855-0721-0008.jpg
  • Earwig shows no problems
  • One dupe link
  • For clarity, was the ship originally to have been a paddlewheeler? I assume so, but this should be more explicit (since you say initially ordered as a "steam powered" ship and then re-ordered as a "screw-propelled" ship
  • Can you add more context to the body on the Crimean War? Remember the intro should summarize the article, so it shouldn't have details that aren't mentioned in the prose.
  • Relatedly, can you tell us when the war ended?

Think that's it - nicely done as usual. Parsecboy (talk) 06:01, 21 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:56, 23 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
On the steam/screw thing, I was referring to this part:
James Watt was originally ordered...as a steam-powered, 80-gun, second-rate ship of the line...[and] was reordered as a screw-propelled ship on 14 June 1849 - the implication is that the original propulsion system was something other than screws. Parsecboy (talk) 21:19, 23 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
Done--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:57, 23 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
One final question - if the reordering didn't have anything to do with the propulsion system, do we know what it accomplished? The name was already changed and the rated number of guns was altered almost 2 years later. Parsecboy (talk) 15:06, 24 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
I misread the sources. It was never reordered; the design was not approved until 1849. Lambert says that it was ordered in 1850, but that's not confirmed by Winfield.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:12, 24 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
Gotcha, easy to do - everything looks good now, great work as usual! Parsecboy (talk) 15:30, 25 June 2026 (UTC)Reply