Talk:Corbin/Hanner

GA review

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Nominator: TenPoundHammer (talk · contribs) 21:47, 8 September 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: LastJabberwocky (talk · contribs) 10:11, 9 September 2026 (UTC)

Hi, nice to work with your again! Trying to clear 'other music' topics in front of my GA nomination :) —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 10:11, 9 September 2026 (UTC)

Copyright

• all green Y
• Article has two images. One is a non-free image with good rationale for keeping and another one is free. Y
• ref 43 has weird date format "14. August 1990."
• The AllMusic bio ref has an inconsistent author format (last name then first instead of vice versa)

Prose

• Singer-songwriters Bob Corbin (April 9, 1951-September 18, 2023) I would switch "-" to "−". April 9, 1951 − September 18, 2023
• According to Snyder, Corbin and Hanner were initially slated to sign to Alfa as a duo when they asked him to record a piano solo for a song they had already recorded with session musicians in Nashville, Tennessee. Snyder, who owned a music studio, chose to re-record five songs they had already completed for Alfa with him, Paxton, and Freeland instead. alternative version; not necessary better ----> According to Snyder, Corbin and Hanner were initially slated to sign to Alfa as a duo and had already recorded new material with session musicians in Nashville, Tennessee, but asked Snyder to record a piano solo for one of the songs song. Snyder, who owned a music studio, instead chose to re-record five or six songs they had already completed, working with Corbin, Hanner, Paxton, and Freeland.
  • The source doesn't mention that the name of the label, alfa, but I think that's ok
• Of these, "Everyone Knows I'm Yours" also peaked at 46 on the Billboard country charts, tying for their highest peak there.[1] In addition to these, the album included their own rendition of "Lord, I Hope This Day Is Good". ----> Of these, "Everyone Knows I'm Yours" also peaked at number 46 on the Billboard country charts, tying for their highest peak position.[1] Additionally, the album included their own rendition of "Lord, I Hope This Day Is Good".
• Black and White Photograph accounted for two singles on the Billboard country music charts in "Work Song" and "Concrete Cowboy", both written by Corbin ---> Black and White Photograph accounted for two singles on the Billboard country music charts, "Work Song" and "Concrete Cowboy", both written by Corbin
• Shedd also assisted the duo in producing the album ----> Shedd assisted the duo in producing the album note: to cut on excessive 'also' in this paragraph
• Both members also played guitar and synthesizer on the album, while Hanner also contributed on mandolin ---> Both members played guitar and synthesizer on the album, while Hanner also contributed on mandolin

Outside of GA

While checking for his cause of death found two more article that can be used:

• His daughter's, Jess Corbin's, release
• This one argues that they reunited in 1989 and their split was prompted by Corbin's move to Ecuador. It also has statistics for the songs written by the duo for other artists

• @LastJabberwocky: I think the "According to Snyder" bit reads fine as is. Otherwise, I think I made all your tweaks. I also incorporated the two sources you found because I thought the information in them was interesting. Also, the "14. August 1990" is not a messed up date. It's page 14 of a publication dated to just August 1990. Ten Pound Hammer (they/them) • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 03:45, 10 September 2026 (UTC)

  Thank you for your work, i have no further suggestions, promoting! —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 09:19, 10 September 2026 (UTC)

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