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Latest comment: 11 days ago by Premeditated Chaos in topic GA review

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Caccothryptus maculosus/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 19:34, 31 October 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 23:16, 31 October 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • Para 2 doesn't match the lead which says identification was primarily based on genitals, here we have 4 characteristics listed and 2 are not about genitals
    • Fixed.-G
  • I'd move the mention that C. maculosus is in that group into Para 2 rather than leaving it in para 3
    • Moved that around.-G
  • " Its head is covered in fine, dense punctures" punctures? if that's a taxonomic term distinct from the common usage I'd gloss it
    • Glossed.-G
  • Similarly you gloss pronotum but not setae or elytra
    • Glossed.-G
  • "despite the species name" for clarity I would explicitly mention Laos here
    • Done.-G
  • "and M. maculosus (Illegible" italics
    • Fixed.-G

And again just to give myself something to do, checking all refs.

  • Hernando & Ribera 2005 both good
  • Hernando & Ribera 2014 all uses good
  • Matsumoto yes
  • Yoshitomi yes, from math - 34 existing and +3 in the paper

Just a few prose gripes. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 23:16, 31 October 2026 (UTC)Reply

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