Draft talk:Jace Shim

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Response to decline (October 2026)

Latest comment: 22 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Thank you for the review. I have revised the draft to address both points:

Inline citations have been added after every statement about the subject.
Independent secondary sources have been added, including a reporter-written book review in Money Today Network (December 2015) covering FVS Marketing and the subject's career; a Mustnews article (June 2026) on his stablecoin book and background; a Brand News article (July 2026, republished by ESGKO) on his co-authored book ESG Stories Told through Green Finance; reporter-written coverage of his seminar presentation in Korea Textile News (December 2016); and news coverage in Gukje News (2015) and My Daily (2025).

Sources connected to the subject (his own columns and publisher or bookstore author profiles) are used only for basic biographical facts, per WP:ABOUTSELF. Unsourced personal details have been removed. ~~I am the subject of the article and have declared my conflict of interest.~~ Clahana (talk) 01:15, 19 October 2026 (UTC)Reply

Correction to my previous COI statement

Latest comment: 21 days ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Correction: in my comment above I wrote that "I am the subject of the article". That was my mistake. I am not Jace Shim. I am a personal acquaintance of the subject, with no business, employment, or financial relationship with him, and I have received no payment or other compensation for this draft. Some biographical details were provided by the subject. I have disclosed this on my user page. The draft is submitted through AfC for independent review. Clahana (talk) 06:16, 19 October 2026 (UTC)Reply

Update: I have since rewritten the draft in a more concise and neutral form. The current version relies mainly on Impact On (17 March 2025) and Must News (18 March 2025) coverage, the subject's doctoral dissertation record (RISS), and book records verified against the National Library of Korea catalog. Some sources listed in my earlier comment are no longer cited; I can restore any of them if reviewers find them useful. Clahana (talk) 06:34, 19 October 2026 (UTC)Reply

Response to the review of 20 October 2026

Latest comment: 21 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Thank you for your feedback. In response to the review, I revised the draft myself and also checked each factual statement against the relevant sources.

I use both Korean and English and I checked whether English text accurately reflected the Korean sources. I removed duplicate content, birth details, company service descriptions, and the unsupported Info Box parameter. I also clarified the subject's names.

As previously disclosed, I used AI assistance for the original draft. For this revision, I reviewed sources individually and rewrote text myself. This was my own source check, not a review by another editor. Clahana (talk) 05:19, 20 October 2026 (UTC)Reply